That was a very sweet chapter, a very fitting epilogue! I have loved every single moment of this story, and I have been gripped from the very beginning! I am sad that it has finished, but I'm happy there was a happy ending!

ur rendering of the highland accent was impeccable

Thanks for the great story! Hey how'd you foind out Mctwisp's first name?

A beautiful, if bittersweet, ending. But it is full of promise, as well. Little Helen.

I agree about Time. I think that Time in Underland is likely very fickle and inconsistent.

Thank you for a wonderful, wonderful story.

Aww! No it's over! I wish there was more but sadly no... I've loved this story throughout. And I'm looking forwards to the next Alice in Wonderland story you bring up! Well done and a definate fave. LL

What a perfectly wonderful way to end this perfectly wonderful story :3 This has really been a delight to read. I can't wait to see your next project!

As before, I absolutely love your story. I’m so sad to see it end. I hope that you have future plans to write another Alice/Tarrant story. You portray them so well and keep them so true to what they were and what they might have been that I would be very sad if you weren’t planning on writing another. Though the ending was short, it wrapped things up so neat and nicely. It was just wonderful. Thank you so much for such a wonderful and beautiful piece of writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.

OMG! I love this! My fave character of all is the Mad Hatter!

This was one of my favorite storys *snif* and now it's over. Can't wait for the new story!

love it!

Thanks for comming on to FF it's nice to have a good writer to turn too when in need of a good AiW story :)

Sequel! Their must be a sequel! Please?

Well, thank you for writing it. :) It's glorious. I loved every chapter of it. -huggles it all- And I will be on the lookout for the future endeavour.

Be well!

Wow, this is an amazing start that has much potential, I can't wait to read the forthcoming chapters! Your language and style of writing suits the story perfectly...perfect!

I love the film 'Alice in Wonderland' (2010)!

Keep up the good work -

Quiffs.

A perfect ending to your story. I will admit to being a little disappointed to not seeing Tarrant but this fits so perfectly. I look forward to what you write in the future!

That was so beautiful. I seriously want to cry it was so touching! I can't even believe it's over now that it is. I better make this last review worth it then, I guess!

Alice's eyes changing to blue...I can just see it! Alice would be perfect with blue eyes although her brown (or are they hazel...) are lovely too. I love that you gave closure between Margaret and her sister. I have a deep fondness for the unexplored character that Margaret is. And little Helen! I'm so glad she has green eyes and a gap in her smile! And I'm glad that you made her seemingly very wise. I can just imagine all the perfect traits she would have between Alice and Tarrant beyond just looks. And being very wise I think would be one of them.

I want to go on and on with my review, but all I can really say is your story from start to finish was perfect. I look forward to whatever adventure comes next. So, until then, Fairfarren to you as well :)