I luv the story and it was a bit confusing but it was still really good

This is cool.

cool love it

good chapter. But I'm a bit confused. Does Artemis like Holly or Minerva? Which one of them has feelings for him? Or do they both have feelings for him?

It's interesting, and cute, but no, it doesn't make much sense. I can't see the fairies shrugging off Minerva's involvement, or waiting three years for Artemis to come back before making a decision. But oh well, this is a oneshot, so it's not that big a deal.

The one thing I really thought was jarring was Holly's characterization. Her dialogue seemed really flat and emotionless. She should have been suspicious of Minerva for being let in on the secret, or irritated at her for the kidnapping fiasco, or teasing Arty about his crush, or *something*.

But overall, not bad. :)

I like it. :) Is this going to be Artemis/Minerva? There's just not enough of those around.

*Dex*