I REALLY REALLY like this story.

I LOVE SATOMI HAKASE.

Sweet story i dont want ben to go he shued MARRY her please.

ben and satomi forever! and i love satomi hakase.

Speaking honestly, I'm a horrible reviewer, but seeing as how no one else has decided to make note of this tale after two chapters of creative talent I'll take my chances.

Okay, let me begin with the foundations of the tale. This appears to be a sequel so I'm not too concerned about feeling lost in regard to the first chapter. It doesn't seem to impact too much on the reading experience though since Ben looks to be some sort of dimensional traveler. (Does this have anything to do with that movie two years back? Not too clear on the premise.)

The flow transitions into the Negima-verse well with the whole Crash and Hello that our protagonist had with Negi and the others so no problems there and having Ben closely associate himself with Hakase was a pretty good move. All in all this is moving along nicely.

Nice details with description by the way. I like how you actually went on to describe the everyone's' voices. I could also imagine appearances quite well in my mind even if that is already enhanced by the familiarity with the original cast.

I'm not very big on grammar so no comments there. Overall this has been a good experience so far.

Onwards with this one, mate...