I like this story a lot! I can really understand how Bella feels and it sounds exactly like something a younger Bella would say and do. Great job! :-]

This is an intersting look at Bella's past. I like the way you included Jake and Billy.

A great story. Very well written.

That was really good! It wasn't what I had expected when I saw the prompt on FHS but this was very good. Thanks for sharing!

Wow I love it so much, this was more than I ever expected. It is just so true, and I can picture Bella being that girl, hell I almost was that girl in high school. I love when she is describing what she wishes she was doing at fourteen. Really beautiful thank you so much for picking this up.