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Reviews for: First Night On Pulse
MelanieUchiha 12/4/11 . chapter 1
I loved it, it was too sweet! :)
ALICE IT'S RAINing 7/12/10 . chapter 1
this was really great its good to see a good friendship fic, well done
Cynderfire 4/17/10 . chapter 1
*tears* This story needs more reviews. Seriously. It's epically awesome.

I wish I could express more words, but I am paralyzed by the awesomeness of this. There doesn't seem to be any grammatical errors though. :D
Fading Into Darkness 3/31/10 . chapter 1
Well, it's nice to finally see Snow brooding in a way other than dropping to his knees and wailing, "NO, SERAH!"

Ahem. Well done. :)
NinjaSheik 3/29/10 . chapter 1
AWW! SO CUTE!
Protoman 3/29/10 . chapter 1
Really nice and well done friendship fic. Though Snow and Fang were way out of character lol. Snow seemed way younger and smaller than he is (being a 21 year old giant), and his personality seemed more like hope than himself towards the end XD. Though maybe that was intentional, and you were trying to create a new type of Snow? And Fang seemed to treat Snow like a little baby even though her, Snow and Lightning are all 21. Heck, even Vanille is 19 in the game, only two years younger. Plus, Fang is only really comforting with Vanille, that's just part of who she is, she doesn't show much of a sweet side to anyone else. Like if this situation were to happen in the game, fang would either not really bother checking on snow and let him have alone time to protect his privacy since they're not close, or she'd just crack some jokes to try and make snow feel better, but ultimately would just tell him to man up n not be a wussy. Although the fic was still interesting of course, and showed a sweet dynamic, I just had a hard time believing it was actually them or that this would happen.
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