|Reviews for Watching, Wondering, Setting Fire|
| dmnq8 2/18/11 . chapter 1
I love the tone of this. You're a very articulate writer, who should be proud of this piece
| Sincynati 6/9/10 . chapter 1
I am super shocked that this hasn't received any reviews!
This WAS sad, just like you promised. Wow. I've always been a big fan of Jiraya/Tsunade, and of the little triangle that more than likely was. I think you've accurately portrayed all of their feelings and emotions at this part of the story, and everyone was nicely in character. Orochimaru's total self-serving, Tsunade's revenge-filled motivation, and Jiraya trying to make up for their disagreements, but...
Very good. Again, I'm surprised this hasn't gotten more reviews.