|Reviews for Not In Service|
| I wanna be the very best 1/22/13 . chapter 1
I love this so much. You could have totally gone in a different direction... but I love what you did. )
| LoveDandelion 11/21/12 . chapter 1
| yunadustrial.twifan 1/24/11 . chapter 1
i loved this. im a big fan of therteen. and twilight. i thought this was awsom. and i like the hole fack nomber thing. seems fair after she did it to trace in the movie.
| Twilightgirl1724 1/23/11 . chapter 1
Okay... I didnt get it. I saw the movie several times and im still confused. This story doesnt make sense and wait she bumps into a boy. So who is the boy. This is really confusing.
| HelioApple 7/20/10 . chapter 1
this is good. i would really consider getting a beta to enrich it a little more! ((:
| Melina95 4/24/10 . chapter 1
i loved it.