| Reviews for Not In Service |
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I wanna be the very best 1/22/13 . chapter 1I love this so much. You could have totally gone in a different direction... but I love what you did. ) |
LoveDandelion 11/21/12 . chapter 1loved |
yunadustrial.twifan 1/24/11 . chapter 1i loved this. im a big fan of therteen. and twilight. i thought this was awsom. and i like the hole fack nomber thing. seems fair after she did it to trace in the movie. |
Twilightgirl1724 1/23/11 . chapter 1Okay... I didnt get it. I saw the movie several times and im still confused. This story doesnt make sense and wait she bumps into a boy. So who is the boy. This is really confusing. |
HelioApple 7/20/10 . chapter 1this is good. i would really consider getting a beta to enrich it a little more! ((: |
Melina95 4/24/10 . chapter 1i loved it. |