Very touching

despite the continuity errors this was brilliantl

Oh, this is so wonderful.

Aw... this was nice. I'd love to see future chapters of this... like when Jar Jar explains to them who their parents were.

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Are you going to do a sequal to this, or leave it? I'm torn between the choices! And again, it was awsome.

*sighs happily* You out-do yourself dang near every time. I've always liked Jar Jar, in a way I sometimes can't explain. I think it's because he's loyal, and a genuinely good, uncomplicated soul. I'd absolutely love to read more of what he has to say to the twins.

Wow! _ Yesss! Ahhh nice Jar Jar fic! How sweet! Please, can you do a sequel? Or maybe a story about Leia and Captain Tarpals? Or have you done one already? _ How did he get to Coruscant? LOL, pardon my questions. I can get purty ecstatic when I read a fic as good as this one ;) I'd be honored if you'd check out my lil Star Wars fics, including my Gungan one, "General Trouble" :)

Beautiful. I never thought I'd see Jar Jar used in such a touching way, but you've done a wonderful job with this. The characters ring true, like this really could've happened after the last scene of RotJ. Thank you!

SWEEEET! That was great. Keep up the good writting. _ lili

Great story. Wonderful connection between the Prequels and Sequels. This Jar Jar fan gives your story a thumbs up! :) :) :)

This was a really sweet story. I really liked it. JarJar WOULD probably do this, if he was alive at the time. Nice.

This was really sweet. I liked how you showed the conflict in Leia. Very realistic.

Good story

I read and enjoyed this on the JC, it's great to see it here. It's a nice change to read a Jar Jar fic; I loved the bit when he says Luke wet him, heh poor Luke. I also like the way you captured Jar Jar's patterns of speech.

Wonderful story! I love it! Neither Luke, nor Jar Jar are my favorite characters, but you really made them come to life here. Great! Please write a sequel! I'm starving for Ani/Padme stories! )