  tlb 4/27/12 . chapter 23 wach dbz more |
 I Before A Except After K 2/21/12 . chapter 29Congratulations. You've managed to take every single character with Saiyan blood and managed to twist their personalities to the point where their sadism could give Freeza a run for his money. I'm both awed and horrified, you awesome, sick person. |
| Son Luna 2/4/12 . chapter 15 Oh god, I couldn't *maniacal laugh* stop *laugh* laughing *laugh again*. This story's great! Poor Gohan... |
| Writer of Angelus 12/20/11 . chapter 25 WHAT IS TIEN *NOT* DOING WITH A THING OF PEPPER? |
| Writer of Angelus 12/20/11 . chapter 20 dende has luggage? *laughing* does he also have a ship? |
| Writer of Angelus 12/19/11 . chapter 12 *chuckling* i know the law, and i love the law in anime/shows/movies, but COME ON! cant you spare gohan a *lil*?
on the other hand...where's the fun in that? |
| Wicked Lovely 17 11/11/11 . chapter 28 love |
| Reviewer 10/1/11 . chapter 4 Sooo FUNNY! LOL!
-Thanks:) |
| Reviewer 10/1/11 . chapter 2 I really liked it. I can tell this story is going to be good. |
| Reviewer 10/1/11 . chapter 1 You didn't spell erasas name right it's not eraser. But over all, I liked the story. Very nice.
-Thanks:) |
| CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing 6/28/11 . chapter 34 Why haven't you updated in over 8 years? |
| the full-sayian princess 4/8/11 . chapter 36 definitely go for a story on the whole vegeta-corrupts-marron-pan-gohan-and-possibly-other-z-kids! |
| ZombieChick422 3/8/11 . chapter 17 Did he grab some dudes crotch,, possibly a certain saiyan's. |
| RoronoaZoro87 12/22/10 . chapter 1 you really need 2 update more 2 this story. ( i read it all ) |
| SaiyaDude 12/10/10 . chapter 11 it breaks the fourth wall and makes me laugh |
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