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archiev
2006-09-18
ch 10, anon.
abuseI know it has been a while since you wrote this but I just found and read it. I hope you decide to continue it. I would like to find out how it ends and see what other trouble Trip gets into.
Donelle
2003-12-19
ch 9,
abuseGreat story...don't know how i missed this one. Keep thoughs chapters coming! Trip always seems to get frozen,baked,half-killed,mugged,impregnated etc. on away missions. does he have some kinda curse??! Anyway good story and i can't wait for the rest.
Donelle
2003-12-19
ch 10,
abuseoh...you love cliffhangers huh? Can't wait for the rest..
The Master Loony Tune
2002-06-27
ch 9, anon.
abuseI thought the Lt. Commander's name was Walking Bear. YOu said Bearclaw in this chapter. Aargh. Now I'm confused....
Aeryn Alexander
2002-04-13
ch 10,
abuseExcellent! Very suspenseful!
Suzanne
2002-04-06
ch 10, anon.
abuseLOL! This just keeps getting better and better! Keep going. Ya got me hangin' here!
technetium
2002-04-02
ch 10,
abusekeep going
scully_tutbals
2002-04-02
ch 9, anon.
abusethis is one of the best stories i have read in a very long time. keep up the good work!!! i was wonderin if i could write the story about how they first found out abot the vamps? give me a yell if that is cool with ya. great writing cant wait to read more
Dorothy(Dotty)Lee
2002-04-02
ch 10,
abusewhoa! You had me worried for a minute there! Poor Trip just keeps getting into trouble don't he!
Please post chapter 11 soon!!!!!!!
RaeTucker
2002-03-21
ch 9,
abusePlease continue.It's getting really good.
CJSpooks
2002-03-20
ch 9,
abuseOooooo...I really like this story and its cliffhanger format. Please write more. It's awesome so far.
Antares*
2002-03-18
ch 9, anon.
abuseWow!! Another great chapter! I cant wait to see what happens! POST ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON! PLEASEEEEEEE!
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Dorothy(Dotty)Lee
2002-03-18
ch 9,
abuseDon't stop now!! I'm really enjoying this story. I like reading action adventure stories anytime. Especially when they're written so well.
Post more soon, pleeeease! :)
Dotty
technetium
2002-03-15
ch 8, anon.
abusethis is interesting. please continue
Dorothy(Dotty)Lee
2002-03-12
ch 8, anon.
abuseOh my Gosh! Where's chapter 9? I'm dying here!!
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