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| archiev 2006-09-18 ch 10, anon. | abuseI know it has been a while since you wrote this but I just found and read it. I hope you decide to continue it. I would like to find out how it ends and see what other trouble Trip gets into. |
| Donelle 2003-12-19 ch 9, | abuseGreat story...don't know how i missed this one. Keep thoughs chapters coming! Trip always seems to get frozen,baked,half-killed,mugged,impregnated etc. on away missions. does he have some kinda curse??! Anyway good story and i can't wait for the rest. |
| Donelle 2003-12-19 ch 10, | abuseoh...you love cliffhangers huh? Can't wait for the rest.. |
| The Master Loony Tune 2002-06-27 ch 9, anon. | abuseI thought the Lt. Commander's name was Walking Bear. YOu said Bearclaw in this chapter. Aargh. Now I'm confused.... |
| Aeryn Alexander 2002-04-13 ch 10, | abuseExcellent! Very suspenseful! |
| Suzanne 2002-04-06 ch 10, anon. | abuseLOL! This just keeps getting better and better! Keep going. Ya got me hangin' here! |
| technetium 2002-04-02 ch 10, | abusekeep going |
| scully_tutbals 2002-04-02 ch 9, anon. | abusethis is one of the best stories i have read in a very long time. keep up the good work!!! i was wonderin if i could write the story about how they first found out abot the vamps? give me a yell if that is cool with ya. great writing cant wait to read more |
| Dorothy(Dotty)Lee 2002-04-02 ch 10, | abusewhoa! You had me worried for a minute there! Poor Trip just keeps getting into trouble don't he! Please post chapter 11 soon!!!!!!! |
| RaeTucker 2002-03-21 ch 9, | abusePlease continue.It's getting really good. |
| CJSpooks 2002-03-20 ch 9, | abuseOooooo...I really like this story and its cliffhanger format. Please write more. It's awesome so far. |
| Antares* 2002-03-18 ch 9, anon. | abuseWow!! Another great chapter! I cant wait to see what happens! POST ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON! PLEASEEEEEEE! * |
| Dorothy(Dotty)Lee 2002-03-18 ch 9, | abuseDon't stop now!! I'm really enjoying this story. I like reading action adventure stories anytime. Especially when they're written so well. Post more soon, pleeeease! :) Dotty |
| technetium 2002-03-15 ch 8, anon. | abusethis is interesting. please continue |
| Dorothy(Dotty)Lee 2002-03-12 ch 8, anon. | abuseOh my Gosh! Where's chapter 9? I'm dying here!! |