|Reviews for Ancient enlightenment|
| Cocoa Girl2 3/31/10 . chapter 1
I do hope that Harry shares this FERU with others. I think Harry should take caution with who he tells and does not remove it from the Chamber. I also think Dumbledore should not be told. Can an adult even use it? Or is it only for children and teen? I hope Harry continues to update his knowledge. I also hope Harry invites Hermione and Luna to use FERU too. The twins too. While under vow no to tell anyone without Harry's permission.
Will Harry focus all the knowledge he learns on only his schooling and fighting Voldemort? Or will Harry one day build a space ship to explore, re-create cures the Ancients knew of. Can Harry build ZPM's?
Will Harry now cut up the basilisk and sell it to make a small fortune? Does Harry have access to enough funds to buy the materials to build a space ship? Wonder if he could have an alliance with the Goblins help him by paying for the materials Harry could move some of them to a non-inhabited planet, away from humans.
There are no Alterian in this galaxy. But had there been in the past? Does this reality have Stargates scattered around the Galaxy? Is there a SGC in this reality?
| Rhianona 3/31/10 . chapter 1
This is an interesting beginning, though I hope you're not going to the route of having Harry run roughshod over the wizarding world.
One thing that bothered me is that I couldn't tell if the machine was called FERU or FERN as you used both acronyms interchangeably. You might want to take a look at that.
| hemotem 3/31/10 . chapter 1
An interesting start I look forward to seeing more of this in the future. I noticed some spelling mistakes mostly capitalization errors but other than those a good read. Once again I look forward to seeing more of this in the future.
| smoss 3/31/10 . chapter 1
Nice story, but there is a lot of grammar and syntax errors, my suggestion would be to get a Beta
| Sajuuk 3/31/10 . chapter 1
very good first chapter
i can't wait to read the next chapter
i think also that you can write more and more long chapter with time
i hope that harry creat weapon, armor and tool like the alterrans or like in the univers of mass effect
please let harry keep with him the FERU and don't speak of him to hermione and ron (i am for the bashing of the two with a dumbledore manipulative)
by and good writting
| jdnokc 3/30/10 . chapter 1
Looks good so far. Hope to see more soon. I like the idea of FERU since the repository never really made sense to me.
| KafeiDetour 3/30/10 . chapter 1
Excellent beginning. I be sure to keep a close ye on it.
| lordreader 3/30/10 . chapter 1
Interesting and original beginning. I am looking forward to your updates and seeing where you plan on going with this story.
| DanielHimura 3/30/10 . chapter 1
Very interesting story. Like it so far.
Cant wait to see more of it.
Any aliens in this dimension?
| Unknown-Ark 3/30/10 . chapter 1
dam dude this is a great start for a HP/SG xover cant wait for the update there are not enough of this story's on ff
| nxkris 3/30/10 . chapter 1
very interesting idea. having janus cause some problems for harry. i like the way harry is given the alteran knowledge. slightly longer chapters would be nice in the future. also, i would suggest that harry keep this a secret from everyone, hermione would be to likely to go to a teacher while ron would likely get really jealous and complain loudly about it in the middle of the common room. also, eventually seeing some technology like guns and shields would be nice also. update soon
| popupman 3/30/10 . chapter 1
Oh. I like so far. I love me a Harry Potter x Stargate crossover! XD Magical Technical rawks da house.
And this is only the third I've found where Harry isn't in the original Stargate universe, but I love the direction you're taking it in!
The others all have Harry somehow ending up in the Stargate universe.. can't wait to read about what your Harry gets up to with his knowledge in his own world :)
| GinaStar 3/30/10 . chapter 1
I can't wait to read more! This looks like it's going to be a fascinating story...
| Raven Marcus 3/30/10 . chapter 1
Cool teaser! please write more!