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Reviews for: 6 Underground
Batman91939 7/6/10 . chapter 1
That was so sad. Poor Yuuki. Good though. :)
ApocalypticDisaster 4/2/10 . chapter 1
Aww, no. So sad. :(

Preety drabble, though. Looking forward to seeing the others. ;)

Disaster
Honest Answer 3/31/10 . chapter 1
It was cute. Not horrible, not great.

Typo

He fingers clenched on a root in the dirt and her tears fell to the earth beneath her fingers.

The first word is he instead of heR. Also you used the word fingers twice, very repetative, completly broke the imersion for me.
isinkintohearts 3/31/10 . chapter 1
That was so sad :( Loved it!
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