|Reviews for Sunflowers in South Park|
| twounderscorethreefour 5/3/10 . chapter 4
GODZILLA! I love that. And how they kept calling it Barbara Streisand. And how Randy called Himawari Chinese. And how Cartman kept calling her "it". Her naivety is so adorable! It's perfect. I'M SO GLAD YOU UPDATED! I love reading this. :D Still looking forward to the homomo gayness. Yes.
| JJ Rust 4/22/10 . chapter 2
I think this chapter moved too quick, to the point I had a hard time getting into any of the characters. The constant switching of points-of-view also made it hard to keep up with. There were also times I didn't have a good sense of where the characters were, like how did Himawari hear that Cartman wanted to kill her. Where was she when he said that?
Some typos I spotted: "pull through" should be "go through"
"I'm have to" should be "I have to"
"where hissed" should be "were hissed"
Keep on writing.
| JJ Rust 4/20/10 . chapter 1
Pretty good start. I can't wait to see what it is Eric has against her. Then again, it's Eric. He's a racist to begin with. Great end line for the chapter. It definitely leaves the reader wanting more. And I love the line from the teacher. "I don't know how to pronounce your name. Take a seat, kid." That's a total South Park line.
Keep up the good work.
| twounderscorethreefour 4/19/10 . chapter 3
OHMYGODTHISISSOINTENSE. I love it! The Butters/Kenny thing was adorable, and the drama between Himawari and her father is so epic. AND DUDE. DUDE. The Godzilla thing! Awesome. So creative and well written.
I'm so happy you updated!
| twounderscorethreefour 4/2/10 . chapter 2
I really like how, even though Himawari is the focus of the story, she isn't the primary character. She hasn't interfered with anything and instead just brought out the qualities I like in most of the characters. Especially Butters! "E-Eric, she's nice!"
Like, come on. Aww!
I like you. I like the way you write. A lot. This is by far the best OC fic I've seen. Especially because STYLE. Oh man oh man am I looking forward to that. This really should have more reviews; it's very good.
You are so versatile! There's something for everyone. You really know how to please the public. Including Style without making it the main focus... AND an OC... m! You rock. Really hard. I want more!
| twounderscorethreefour 3/31/10 . chapter 1
AW SHE'S SO CUTE. Normally I would accuse her of being a Mary Sue, but she's so sweet and cute and I can tell that she won't interfere with my delicious Style. And Creek. And Bunny. GOD, I LOVE THEM ALL. If you include those IN AN OC STORY then I will love you for years and years. Your writing is superb. I love the way you described Himawari. Her eyes and her hair and hng SHE'S SO CUTE. This is awesome. I like your writing style as well. Please continue! And rock on.
| Christiansoldier5 3/31/10 . chapter 1
you know... i WAS going to favorite this story, but the instand i saw you say "style" i'm just going to keep reading, until i see them in bed together.
THEY ARE JUST FRIENDS! WHY THE MOTHERF*CKING HELL CAN'T ANYONE ACCEPT THAT?