loved it great story and love this paring as well

After all, this time Sirius Black was playing for keeps.

LOVED that!

Great little fic ;)

that was really really brilliant...honestly.

i know you see someone else as Sirius but I absolutely love Gary Oldman...i do with him what you do with that Caville bloke...when I write I usually picture Gary as my main male character...

that was an awesome story though...

you have a gift my friend.

Wow! This was so amazing! It was really, really, really hot as well! *grins* Loved the whole thing - The argument between Hermione and Sirius, the super sexy smut and the happy ending with the beginning of their relationship. Brilliant job all around!

Thanks so much for writing this! I very much loved reading it!

Wonderful. _

Gah! I could not love this more than I do.

Thanks so much!

celia

I'm so sorry it took me ages longer than I meant to get around to reading this! It was really scorching, but had a whole slew of lovely little details - both in description and just in writing style.

I'll admit the first paragraph kind of made me wonder if this was going to be a dramatic angry fight sort of story, and I was really pleased to be wrong - you did a great job of giving their relationship depth and realistic conflict in a very short space. And the BMW was a really, really nice touch - the commentary on Sirius' purchase of a car, both from his perspective as well as Hermione's. I love those little details - very in character, and they just FIT.

PLEASE don't take this with any kind of condescending tone, but it really seems like every one of your pieces just consistently improves all-around. It's evident you really put thought into your writing process. It's always really exciting to find authors who *do* try to improve over time, because surprisingly and sadly, in fanfiction not everyone does. And as a writer, there's always always room to better oneself, you know?

Also, picturing Henry as Sirius in this? Extra super added bonus yumminess!

OMG i LOVE THIS STORY! I watched the music video and you capture the ambiance perfectly! :D Well this is definately going on my favs list!

Take about a happy and satisfaing ending to a disaggreement. Not that those two had any problem with it. Great story!

henry cavill?

oh my god

you're killing me here...

thank u :)

Lovely. The image of them kissing on the bridge with the car abandoned by them was so clear in my mind. Great story.

Amazing! But it makes me sad to be reminded that the stupid Muggle world doesn't have any Notice Me Not spells.. ;)

The storyline at first seemed a little confusing, but once I understood the Parvati part I really was drawn into the drama, and of course the passion through the rest. You obviously put a lot of thought into what you wanted to achieve with this story, so great job!

wonderful!

I loved this stoy! It was so good. I loved the sof side of Sirius you showed, it was great.