Ah, owari desu?

The ending seems kinda rushed...or is it just me?

Awww! *Squeals delightedly*

First time I've ever read a Chibiusa x Helios fic and I LOVE this to death! Although I would have liked to see the other senshi besides Mercury play a bigger role, I think this was perfect, considering the circumstances. Poor Hyperion...( Which, I loved your characterization (and naming) of Aurora, Eos, and Hyperion. Chibiusa's Guardian Senshi were also done very well. I've never read the manga, so I only know them as the Amazon Quartet, but I would imagine that they would be quite similar to their superiors (Mercury, Venus, Mars, Jupiter) in terms of guardianship. I also liked how you decided for Chibiusa to drop the "Small Lady" part of her name, since she's older. I always thought that was a part of her name, but "Serenity" is a family tradition, so I had to keep reminding myself that it was her name as well as her mother's. )

Thank you for such a wonderful story! I have really enjoyed it!

This story had it all-it made me want to cry at parts and had me biting my nails at others. The first time she had that creepy dream, I was actually seriously nervous! Fantastic job! I hope you write a sequel or at least a oneshot to tell about their marriage or their kids-just a little something to make it a "happy" ending (although it was happy, it seemed too caught up in the drama to seem super happy, you know?). Once again, it was a wonderful story!

Amazing! One of the best stories I've read!

Wedding Epi! Please!

Omg I am so happy he is okay. Will you continue?

Wow, I'm kind of sad it's over. You did a great job with this story! It was so beautifully written, and it has the right amount of drama, suspense, romance... So yeah, I loved it, and I hope you'll keep writing! God bless!

Oh the seven chapters are perfect

A wonderful ending to a beautiful story. But it feels like the ending was a bit rushed.

C-A

AWWWW YAY HE IS BACK NOW WRITE A SEQUEL PLEASE. I LOVED IT

Omg! Awesome story, I love it! Keep it up!

why don't Usagi, Endymion, and Serenity get together, have Hyperion drop it and dive right in to save him. Update soon!

Is anybody in the royal family going to NOT try to commit suicide?

C-A

oh no! This is not good! Update soon!

So...are ya ever gonna update, very good story full of nice grammar, suspense, and mystery i wonder if new developments will turn up in the story later on?

well anyway, keep up the great work

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