more please

I can see that its been about four months since this story has been updated, but i believe you should go on with it, its amazing.

Gah, another cliffhanger! *Pulls out a shotgun*

Seriously, I liked how you portrayed Shepard's over-protectiveness. As someone who lost his father at a n early age, I guess it would make sense for him to worry about his son's future.

... and it was nice to see Grunt and Wrex. :P

Looking forward to the next chapter/s. D

I thought you were going to release this on Monday. XD

In any case, I enjoyed this chapter very much. D

Looking forward to chapter 6.

nice chapter! It's good to see what Miranda is capable of when she's in a rage . keep it up

Awesome. Absolutely awesome. I'm really intrigued by how you portrayed Miranda's father. Is he saying the truth? I wonder.

And the idea of Oriana as a byproduct of an illicit affair. Interesting. The thought had crossed my mind before, but never gave it serious though.

Looking forward to the next chapters. ;)

Looks like things are heating up. I'm interested in the characters you have introduced in your story. I wonder who exactly Delta and Nex Matris are. Oh and the teasing from Miranda was a nice touch. :p

Glad to see Zaeed getting some "exposure" in FF. Haven't really seen many fics that feature him.

I do have one major complaint though...

You left me hanging. XD

Kidding aside, keep up the good work. Looking forward to seeing more of this. D

So far so good.

this 2 chapters are introducing the characters well, the situation as well. The flashbacks are nicely put.

It is only chapter 2 but it is really promising. Keep up!

yes shepard go kill them bitches lol

That was fast. O

Putting that bit which dealt with Shepard's reaction with regards to his crew/team's death was a nice touch. It shows that the commander is not the nearly emotionless soldier people often portray him to be. This shows that Shepard was only better at hiding his emotions.

I liked how you portrayed Miri in this one. I could definitely imagine the way you portrayed the interaction between Shepard and Miri.

P.S. It's good to know that Shepard now has some measure of self-control when his wife turns on the charm. XD

I'm really, really interested by this story. Very interesting premise. Looking forward to seeing how this goes.

To be honest, I think this story of yours has just inspired me to write chapters that deal with proposal and pregnancy for moments.

You wouldn't mind, would you? O