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Jay-Leigh17 11/23/10 . chapter 1
I really liked this.

I enjoyed the way you were almost vague, but gave us enough detail to decide we know what's going on.

I'm off to read more of your work. :)
Maura-boo-147 4/4/10 . chapter 1
I love how realistic it is. I was diagnosed with OCD when I was seven, and I can tell you that this is a nearly perfect portrayal. And I obsessively wash my hands as well, although I've mostly gotten over it. I love how you wrote it, it's beautiful. I was going to write something like this, but this is better anyway.
SassyCop 4/1/10 . chapter 1
Sad...and I could totally see this happening on the show. She drives herself nuts taking care of him.

This is very good! And very insightful.
Nr.Six 4/1/10 . chapter 1
Poor poor Gillian! Very heavy story! But written very well. I would feel so awful for her if this would happen.
Rugbygirrl 4/1/10 . chapter 1
I like it! It always amazes me how she takes the crap from Lightman and seems to still be all sunny and sweet. I would've knocked him into next week long ago! But then again no one has ever accused me of being 'sunny and sweet' :)
StepFurther 4/1/10 . chapter 1
And again an AMAZING, but this

"...he takes a little piece of her with him..."

was the MOST amazing!

LOVE!

Awesome!
binhereb4 4/1/10 . chapter 1
Brillient reprsentation of the start of OCD, and the reasons behind it - and yes- I can see Gill resorting to something like this because of Cal and her feelings. great insight and well written one off.
Fearsome Foursome 4/1/10 . chapter 1
Great story! Gillian is such a clean slate right now; we know so little about her. I completely understand your fascination with her, and I could see this happening, too. Heart-breaking, but wonderful. Thanks for sharing!
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