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looooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooove it! need more! pretty please!

A total turn on! Loved it!

poor alice. she didn't see that one coming!

wow... That was... Interesting? You should make one where alice lives with her father and she gets abused by him everyday and she then moves to Forks with him because they had to relocate and there she meets edward,bella,emmett,rosalie (etc.) and they start getting suspicious when they see her bruises at a sleepover they all have and everything goes downhill from there... That should be quite interesting... But it was just an idea...

That was Hot. Capital H intended. ;)

i love that it was so cute :)

u should write a stroy like this wiyh some more of the twilight couples

love the whole role play thing...shoot, it only makes sense for Vampires to entertain themselves for eternity somehow. hee hee :)

Holy cow! This was one HOT story! I could easily picture the scene...and it was quite a change, as usually Alice is the little fiesty one! But it was nice to see Jasper in charge!

awesome! carry on

OMG! I loved this story! Who knew Jasper was so feisty! Hot!

Ok, so, I tell everybody this, but I just got married and my husband's name is Jasper. 3

LOL, so ironic.

Maybe you could write a shower one-shot because u r good writing sexy fics!

Gigi

Loved this one-shot!

Read more of them! :)

great story!

That was a great story! You're really good at descriptions. Thanks!