This was really good but I wish there had been more to it.

Wow! I like it, thought is bitter sweet I like it.

Its a foreing concept to know Earth is gone and Sam feels responsable for you got that right, the fact thet Jack is the one going after her was really good an dof course the fact that he has other "intentions" is good.

Is there more to this chapter? I hope so :)

Nice, I really enjoyed this. I have not read many stories where Sam failed and this one is good and I feel true to character. I too believe that Sam would feel guilty if it was her plan they were using. I never imagined how long it would take her to get over it but I always felt that with SG1 help she would eventually get over the guilt. I like the idea of picking a place that she knew only Jack knew where she was. Noow why Jack just didn't say To Dainel and Teal'c I'll go find her and talk I'm not sure. I do believe this is true to his character but sometimes this part of Jack can be confusing. I'm also practically sure that Daniel and Teal'c knew that he would be going to talk to Sam when he stormed out. I would not be surprise if they said what they said to give him that push.

Thanks

:-)

This feels like the the first chapter of a much longer story. Thanks for writing.

Good story. Too bad you ruined the ending.