Will Conan Ever age or will he be a child forever.

This is really sad, but I like it alot. The concept was great and I've never seen anything like it before. I wish there was more! The way you wrote it was genious, if not a bit confusing-I had to keep going back and rereading some parts in a different order. Just saying too bad it couldn't continue-oh well. Great job

:O that is so sad...:( vut it was very good...:)

Great story! Can I make a squeal to this?

Wonderful story. It was a little hard to understand at first, because it was like two stories in one. I must read the sequel.

Aww...that was so sad! Yet, I loved it! Well, I've always loved depressing things. Great job!

Wow this made me feel realy depressed ' Good job on it. I really like how you wrote it :3 Very intersting.

That was certainly an interesting twist to the story. Nicely done.

-tear- aw... Okay, I'm definitely going to read the sequel now...

T_T *sniff sniff* this story is SO SADD! i felt like crying T_T *sniff* but good job :)

He's going to give up that easily? I mean, he's a detective! Go look for some clues as to how to dispel his immortality, dammit! *coughs* Ugh.

That aside, that was terribly sad. T_T Beautifully written, though. And believable.

Oh my god, that's so sad! *cries*

Beeing immortally... that's terrible...!

Poor Shinichi... :'(

this is sad but the good kind of sad almost made me cry this is a good fanfica little short though.

*sniff*

its so sad!

It was well written too!

Oh! That was really... sad... Poor Shinichi! And Ran! And Ai! But even though it's really sad, this is REALLY well written! I like it alot!

Leila