love this story so hot!

Story in the story? Awesome. Never knew Orihime was so dirty

Awesome fic

crack story? hahaha...crack. Good and funny as HELL!

Wow...I had no idea Orihime had such a dirty mind, lol.

Good work.

Unohana is a sexy doctor.

Nice little one shot good job, To bad it not more. It would have made an nice story

This is the rarest thing I have ever seen.

I rarely find a good Yuri fic in Bleach. It's even rarer to find one with Unohana with someone other than Isane.

good work

0-0 ...wow. I felt myself harden while reading this. I'm not a Bleach fan, but...man. Keep up the great work!

OMG! *big bulging eyes* hehehe...

I LUV this story ! Could u pleasa do me a favor and let Chizuru have a cock. I think it would be cool for her to fuk Orihime and Tatsuki. AWSOME STORY !

Wait so it was a story in a story? Also did unohana have a well UH DICKIE! as well? Other than that and the fact I do not know who seia kazama is or how she relates to the story but it was enjoyable as was akward so yeah a 9/10 for one BIG LIPPED ALLIGATOR MOMENT!

WHA...? I mean, cool but WHAT TH...?

Heh, nice April Fools joke, erm, I mean story. Really made my day, plus it was sexy.

Nice job!

Oh, so this is what you've been working on. It's quite interesting though the most exquisite part would have to be of how it's somewhat connected to Creatures of The Night. It really gives the impression that you attempt to expand on the universe of it, especially if you get to make Black Sabbath. It was good to read another story from you. Nice work.

heh. It's still April Fools where I'm at, so you're good.

This one wasn't as completely crack as the last two, but there's nothing wrong with that. It was awesomely sexy and fun.

Well done.