Awwww that was so sweet! Well written!

I love this, love it, love it, love it! And you've gotten me hooked on that song. :)

Ellisama is right: this is the exact same story as the other one. Did you upload it twice, or did something get messed up and erase the story that was supposed to be here?

Hey nice story, that's not it, but this is the exact same story as the supposed prequel. If I'm reading the summery correctly, the other one is messed up. I'd love to read the Narusasu version, soooo... Are you intend on updating the other one? Please? Pretty please with yuri on top?

Oh WOW it was definitely one of the best's one shot's i've ever read , i loved the final it was so sweet, yet so delicate, i totally felt the flare of love , i would like very much if it were a sequel ilove it, please wright more inosaku :D

very nice i realy liked the depth in this fic i cant w8t to read more of your work

OMG it was great i love it simply love it you aré a very good writter