oh!i want to know whats gonna happen next!this is very well written. i asume its time is present day.well i need to knoww whats gonna happen.

oh! wonder what happens! good so far!

Kinda weird, but I liked it. I think you could turn it into a longer story, with Tama's dream coming true and him having to save Miaka or something...but I don't know, I'd read that if you wrote it anyway.

hey!! Wow... I haven't talked to you since Lanen's party...ummm I did email you once or twice...LOL NEWay, this was great! You know I'm not really into anime...but your fics are really good! NEWay...ttyl...if you're wondering why I'm rambling like this, it's 85 degrees out...and my school has no air or heat or windows...and I'm barely staying awake...lotsa h.w. to do yet... But now I'm getting way off topic...Lol email me!
~Katie
BTW I stopped sending out forwards. LOL

That was beautiful, I loved it. Keep it up, I want to read the rest of it, so you just keep on writing kay!! ^_^!! Tamahome is so cute, but Tasuki is so much better!!!

Short, but good. You need to update it! Don't tell me this is all! Please R&R my fic!