Been a while since I have seen this. So far it is good, but I am noticing some mistakes but writing takes practice. Sorry I haven't been in the reviewing mood today. That and I don't know what else to say. Keep writing I guess.

Sorry for the late review. Overall this chapter was pretty good. My review length is short becasue so was your chapter. Okay I know who the scarred fox is. At first I thought it might be Scarface but now I can see that isn't the case. Oh btw it's Weasel not Wiesel. Just offerign some advice. So far it short but good.

I noticed a mistake or two but nothign rally serious. Sor far it was good. Looks like they are getting a plan together.

too similar to the books when vixen was chased by the hounds

Well I am officially caught up. Hope to see more. You know I just thougth of something. I thought there were no wolves in Europe.

The advertisements have me thinking that there is something large goign on. Not sure though. Good chapter is all I ahve to say.

The plot takes a new turn. I still see some mistakes. Sorry I just have to mention I really hope I am not annoying or making you feel bad. Hope to see more.

I noticed soem spelling and grammer mistakes. Mainly you misspelled Weasel and left some names and the start of sentances lower cased. Just trying to help.

Scavenger. Fro some reason the name fits. This chapter was short and sweet. That's all I have to say.

The script line made me smile. Fourth wall breaking! Always funny if doen right and you did it right. Still noticed soem mistakes but I still like this story.

This start was good. Coudl ahve used a bit more description and I noticed some spelling mistakes but nothing too bad. I will get to the rest when I can and look forward to more. BTW I suggest jedijari's stories. Have you read my story Empty Heart? If you don't mind me asking.

Nice work. Keep it up, and let's see where it goes. BTW, have you read my fanfic 'Lazarus, Arise'?