Nice XD I don't see why people dislike Rosh, I liked him! Anyway, very sweet, I especially liked Kyle coming in at the end XD

Hahaha I love Kyle. Good job!

So sweet! Well done ")

About time someone did a romance with female Jaden and Rosh. I really want to thank you for this little piece of fiction, you made my day with it.

I haven't noticed any grammar mistakes or misspelled words which is another plus for me. All in all, this was enjoyable read. The only trouble I had was visualizing Jaden since I prefer to play as the light-haired human female which is how I look like in RL and I always strive to create characters to my visual likeness. But other than that, good work.