Nicely written, with an interesting kind of closure.

Thanks for writing this.

This was awesome and you did a great job with staying in Bartimaeus's character. Thanks!

Great work! :)

Now I'm actually crying. This darn category is so depressing! What happened? I used to read it before Ptolemy's Gate came out and they were all people trying to nail Bartimaeus' voicce, the wit and humor. Now it's all sad stuff about them missing each other.

But not bad, really.

-for you.

Aww! *wipes tear* Gah! That was beautiful. You really got the bond of two people who have been through something huge perfectly. Great job. Loved the song lyrics...will be looking that up.

...I don't really get it. It pretty much makes sense until Kitty asks about Farrar.

Mmm, too short. I really liked this - they seemed perfectly in character, and it just had a nice feel to it. I do wish it were longer, if only because it's so good. Well done

Aus

Is It a one shot? Keep going please! Added to alerts just in case ;)

Wow. I absolutely loved it. I wasnt really satisfied with the ending of Ptolemy's Gate and this kind of helped. Its sooooo sad. :(( Please continue!

Division Head :((

EH! Quit making me almost cry!

Just kidding. It's really great that you can call up readers emotions like that.:) You're awesome.

"God help whoever tries to tear Kitty Jones down."

Favorite line.

:D

keep writing! You'll be famous someday!

-Valkerie

this was absolutely positively PHENOMENAL.

and this would have made an excellent epilogue, in my opinion.

I sense a pattern with Bartimaeus' summoners that are nice...

Kitty! Stop, send him back before you die too! He has quite enough forms to be getting on with.

Nice stuff.

Peace out and rock on,

Anzer'ke.

I love the understanding these two have- and Bartimaeus taking Nathaniel's form. fantastic writing.

my favourite parts were the simple way they acknowledged Nathaniel (because a flowery or depressing speech wouldn't have fit), and-

As inappropriate as it is, a little smile curls his boy lips. She's still the same. Her face changed, her life changed, her heart changed, but Kitty – nothing in the entire world could make her less good, less strong, less incredible.

If he had a heart, he would give it to her.

and

Bartimaeus clears his throat. "Right, then. Did you have a point with all this summoning jazz? Hardly a fun experience for me, after all."

Kitty snorts. "There was me thinking you'd be pleased to see me."

He makes a noise like a buzzer. "Err. Wrong." But there's a wry smile rising that he can't press down, and they both know it is a lie.

I haven't really thought of this story in ages upon ages, but when i did- I remembered why I both liked and was saddened by how it ended- thank you for that!

This is really well-written. It's sweet and sad, without being overly mushy.

"She leaves her pentacle and kneels down in front of him. She traces, softly, the immaculately recreated jawbone, the curve and stretch of his neck. He tilts his head, and his eyes lock onto hers." - This was my favorite line. I'd love to see you continue this. :)