 crysbit 11/6/11 . chapter 12Oh wow! Something tells me I should have been here a year ago so that I could be begging for the next chapter! Is this cliffhanger ever going to be resolved? It's soooo delicious! |
 bg Roman 5/31/10 . chapter 12Oh, man! Gio's going to be in LONDON!
Trazzle, you know how to keep us in suspense! What's in that article?
Loved this sentence: She intended to skim it but ended up devouring every word as though it was the last she would ever hear of him.
It really got the message across to me, that Betty has a uncontrollable compulsion about this particular sandwich guy.
Matt? Chasing her again? No, no, no! Don't give him the time of day, Betty! |
 sparkysdreamer 5/29/10 . chapter 12Oh Trazzle exams and concerts getting in the way of writing Getty...shouldn't be allowed...! Then you gift me this chapter...for well being as always...so very ...patient and what do you do to me...MATT...Well me thinks he's a Daniel homage that ''''meal'''' just as friends...sounds well...familiar...but what will she do...will she do the deed, will she fall for Hartleys charms...and NEVER read the ARTICLE...is she totally STUPID...come on Gio get your little ass over that pond and GO GET YOUR GIRL...and well I'm expecting a FANDABBYDOZI result and not just your exams lady...okay? |
 sparkysdreamer 5/13/10 . chapter 11Oh yes Trazzle that was so damn depressing, so angsty it ALMOST HURT...my ventricles need massaging I'm going into arrest girl...but as you know that's my most FAVE sort of writing...so tense, so awful, so heart renderingly sad it breaks you in two...WONDERFUL...and tut tut tut...sever all ties...WHO THE F ARE YOU KIDDIN...and Trazzle it'll be okay...the computer stuff is over and well those two are like a fever it has to break before you start to heal... |
 bg Roman 5/12/10 . chapter 11Oh, the misunderstandings, the hurtful history, and the misguided attempts to keep their dignity!
Thank you for another engaging installment of Gio and Betty's unlucky love life!
I loved this sentence:
Inwardly he wept, her slowly retreating form looking frail.
This one sentence really made me feel both character's dark and dismal emotions.
I hope things will look up soon. Betty, don't sever ties, you just have to be willing to risk offering him your heart! |
 sparkysdreamer 5/6/10 . chapter 10Oh that's wicked RAzzle Trazzle...stopping it there just to tease us...me ...ooer I've had my head in risk assessments since I came home from work...anxious to read this and what do I get...HARTLEY...I mean a little...itzy...bitzy glance and look down from Rossi...you stick in the mud man staying away from the party cos you knew you couldn't resist Suarez and then running away because she's enjoying herself ...what did you expect...don't fightit Rossi you're toast...you want to hug her, you want to kiss her you want to...her...and Trazzle an added bonus you mentioned The Ugly Truth...ha!
Now second half of this, I know you ...you've written chapter 11 already I'm certain of it...lol |
 bg Roman 5/6/10 . chapter 10I love the way you are using Christmas and New Years as settings, it brings all the characters together, and it makes Betty feel more alone than ever. Holidays are rough for singles! And Gio refuses to go to a party with her, ouch. We feel Betty's pain.
And Amanda and credit cards! A shopaholic. How typical, and how typical that Betty would know about a hidden card.
Ugh Matt! But Betty sympathizes with him, she isn't a monster, and she used to love him. But, yuck! Enough already. I guess the important thing is that Matt's kiss in no way compares with the one Gio gave her.
What the heck is Gio doing there? I thought maybe she was imagining him. Oh! She's running in heels ... then bare feet? On a New York street in winter? We know from this, if we didn't before, Betty must be crazy desperate.
Aye, what a place to leave the story hanging? Hello, cliff! |
 Beatrice Benedick 5/6/10 . chapter 10no! no! no!... Matt has a way to ruin things. But it's not even his fault! it's Betty's fault. Bad timing. REALLY bad timing. And Gio refused to go to Daniel's party.
Now i can't wait to read more. What will Gio say? |
 Beatrice Benedick 5/3/10 . chapter 9Trazzle thanks for updating so quickly (even if you are in the midst of your daily life compromises...love you for that).
This was quite a sweet Hilda-Betty moment. Very much like the show itself: S3-S4 Betty letting her pessimism overcome her positivism (she needs Gio badly to bring her out of her eternal dark side) and Mamma Hilda the know-it-all...she can read Betty very easily (mostly because she gives herself away! you captured that accurately).
And THE ANIMALISTIC KISS! lol at that expression. We should add it to the Getty vocabulary.
And just in the middle of all that funny dialogue you make a sudden stop with: ""Do you think he could ever love me again?" nice! you bring us back to the angst of her hopeless heart. |
 sparkysdreamer 5/3/10 . chapter 9Oh Trazzle sorry real life getting in the way today...how dare it!
That was delicious babe really and mama Hilda the all knowing one who can smell a snog from a hundred miles away getting it out of Betty and so loving at the end ..she knows Gio always loved his B...will always love his B and he can never be...angry for too long he needs her, he wants her...he has ALWAYS love her...he just needs to allow himself because finally and twenty years too late he now knows she needs, wants and dearly loves him...
Bummer you'd better have chapter 10 on the go ...never mind exams...ha ha! |
 bg Roman 5/3/10 . chapter 9Yay, Hilda will prompt Betty into action! Trademark Hilda to dig the truth out of her.
And with Hilda's encouragement, I hope Betty realizes she must find Gio, and fight to break through his defenses.
Loved this from Betty:
"No big deal and just F.Y.I he kissed me."
Of course, Betty, being Betty, she could not help herself from correcting Hilda, thus spilling the beans, lol! |
 sparkysdreamer 4/29/10 . chapter 8Wowsa that's so good...oh dear this is a stocking filler chapter...love and hate these but mainly love...oh I can't wait now ...you're going to pull a Betty post party chapter next aren's you Trazzle to further frustrate me and well I'm guessing a bit of Metty jealousy to play you know to ensure Gio finds out he REALLY LOVES SUAREZ... a little part of his heart that was only B's...oh that's so beautiful and so true...oh is that the name of a song and a St Gio moment...now the crappy part having to wait for chapter 9 ...I don't do waiting and I bet Rossi is just itching to grab hold of Suarez again...cos she's...addictive and he's addicted to lurve |
 Beatrice Benedick 4/28/10 . chapter 8Trazzle. Thanks for the dedication. Great work on the Mia and Nella characters. I love how Gio interacts with the women of his life. He is so active and so caring and overprotective. But most important, he's so happy.
And Betty brings that part of him where there's mostly pain and that probably puzzles him and hurts him and still "there was a tiny little part of his heart, battered and bruised though it was, that bore the name Betty. It belonged solely to her."
Isn't that beautiful?
Thanks for this chapter and... WOW. it worked. you wrote it immediately. Would it work if i wish for it...again? :D |
 bg Roman 4/28/10 . chapter 8Oh dear, will heartbreak and solitude be Gio's lot in life? And surrounded by annoying girls who make him self-conscious about it?
Nella is typical Nella here, loved it when she said this:
"... jealousy and love are a lethal combo-makes you say all kind of crap ... I had to listen to it all through the Egg Salad era."
And his beloved Angela's last wish to him, so touching and so loving ... so like her to be so thoughtful. And poor Gio, he wants to love again but he fears it more. You describe him so sad and poignantly here:
"A fragile heart twice shattered yearns to be whole again but Gio felt sure that the pieces wouldn't fit together anymore."
Beautifully written. I really felt Gio's dilemma.
What will he do? What will Betty do? |
 Beatrice Benedick 4/28/10 . chapter 7holy st. Gio.
I HOPE that you write the next chapter NOW! Like RIGHT NOW! I wont be a bad girl. I'll review it on time... gosh! dynamite. you said it yourself. it's pure dynamite when they are together... la la la I LOVE GETTY! VIVA LA GETTY!
You did it! this chapter is just the thing I just LOVE about Getty and fanfiction. I have so many favorite quotes. Gio leaning to Betty muttering those CRUEL CRUEL (and oh darn-sexy) words to her face. Pushing her to the wall.. KISSING HER! HOLY! HOLY! HOLY!
I'm not able to articulate a decent review (have i ever _) but... I am loving how you made this scene so believable. I believe that Gio would explode like that, i believe that excruciating moment between them would only inevitably end in passion. I can picture Gio leaving Betty puzzled and confused, just like that... after such display of passion.
You said: "It's quite a long chapter but I think the end is worth it ;)"
and you have NO IDEA. |