Wow, congratulations on your 101st fic. You are a phenomenal writer. I started reading and then i was like: How can you write like that? You're a brilliant author; well done :)

wow,,i really like it

i've read the manga though it's really slow to update, i think it's great

zenxshirayuki is canon...but i also like the possibility o obiXshirayuki too,,

can you make an obiXshirayuki fic?

I. Love. This. This is a fabulous one-shot! I can just imagine this! *Laughs* Thank you for writing such a nice story! I look forward to many of your stories! Great job!

awwwww super cute! loved it XD

i wish they turned this into a anime!

-Red

cute

Too much! It's too much! You have a good vocab by the looks of it, and you don't have many grammar mistakes, but it's he way you write it. You have the tendency to overuse adjectives. I mean, some of your description is really great, like azure sky and such, but you're using too much! Although I was reading avidly from the start, I found myself wandering off after a while. Also, you're sentence structure. Okay, read through the story, dedicating one breath to each sentence you make, and you'll get a rough idea of what I mean. You have a lot of very good points in this story, and I would think that Vocab is your strong point and overall, it was well written, but it has the potential to be even better. Good job though.

Amazing! So tranquil, deep and dolce. I love this fic so much, I can even imagine a breeze silently approaching. Nice work of you.

Love the story hope you write another one w/ this couple again.

Aww

That was so sweet

I can't believe there are other people who liked Shirayukihime too, the manga is just too cute not to laugh whenever I read it. Glad to see another fan I guess.

The story is pretty nice, you describe their somewhat awkward but very close relationship well. But maybe the recent development in the manga will change that. I can hardly wait. Haha

Wow, that was really good, and generally in character too! Thank you so much for another Akagami Fic. I'm really looking forward to the sequel!