I enjoyed this story quite a bit! Thanks for the awesome read :)

I want a pet ray now! :3

This could have easily been an actual episode- keep writing stuff like this!

I doubt its 911 in England...It's actually 999 and 000 in Aus for an extra piece of info for ya.

I think you captured Matt Smith as the Doctor in this story very well. My sister is obsessed with him yet she HATES Doctor Who. Great story.

Hey there! I enjoyed the story! Thank you very much for an entertaining read.

O.o I'm 3loving3 this! Please update soon! :)

i want a jammy dodger! Good fic - there are too few 11 fics out there right now. There's moments when you get Amy and the Doctor's voices right, but still not really there, but that's only to be expected after a few episodes, no doubt you'll improve.

So basically, keep on trucking!

This was a really great chapter. I love the ray and I like the idea of it also being from Gallifrey.

Lovin this story, keep up the brilliant work!

*the Doctor bites into a biscuit*

"Alright, it's a Jammy-Dodger! But I was promised tea!"

I loled at that!

I'd love a TARDIS self-destruct! It'll go nicely with my dalek-made tea. M. I love your story. Really, it's amazing. The planet is great, and the ray is great, and it all sounds realistic. Sometimes made-up aliens can sound a bit fake, but this sounds like it could be an episode. And I love a bit of 11/Amy as much as the next person (as long as they like it too!) Please keep updating so speedily!

Meg

Nice job, Stark! :D

Good update! And continually a Good story.

Especially since I think that the Moff

totally missed out on a major opportunity.

And you've expertly filled that void. :)

One thing though. Amy Pond's actually

SCOTTISH, NOT Irish! (And at 10 or 11,

she had to move south to rural southwest

England to live with her grandmum after

her parents died.)

Other than that though, everything's

looking brilliantly great so far. :D

And I can't wait to see who OR what

Amy and the Doctor meet NEXT on this

undersea 'venture. :)

Sharma,

still lovin'

this loike whoa! :D

Great chapter, I really enjoyed it. Very interesting.

Just thought i'd point out though, Amy is Scottish, not Irish :)

Oh my God!

I love it! You have me hooked.

And how good was Victory of the Daleks?

I thought it was brilliant!

Brilliant, and I love the planet, except that Amy is scottish, not irish. But apart5 from that, great.

Meg

Oh, please update soon. I love this story!