wOw
that was deep.

Aw, I'm not logged in. This was cool. I enjoyed Mikey's account of the events as it were in the movie. Nice idea. :)

One word.
Wow.

wow just wow! I loved reading this!

What an interesting story. I liked the ending.

Wow, that was awesome! Such great character development! I didn't really like how much the CGI movie glazed over that year apart, especially why Don took over and what prompted them to get jobs. What you wrote about them loosing themselves, etc. was really poignant, especially Raph's. Excellent job...truly a treat to read! :D

Dang, Amicitia... that's some serious writing there! That's a very logical progression of descent for our poor boys, and I loved getting to see it through Mikey's eyes. Poor little dude... *hugs Mikey*

That part with Leo, "I'll be home before you know it", and it being a lie... sheesh I almost turned on the waterworks! Props, girl, this was fantastic, if sad!

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