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Reviews for: A Shattered World
mary ali cullen 9/9/11 . chapter 1
I really liked this, great job:)
0utlaw3d 6/22/11 . chapter 1
That was great! Too bad it was just a one shot…
hpfan1987 3/16/11 . chapter 1
I really like this pairing. Its a bit unusual but I think it fits!
Kaci 7/24/10 . chapter 1
Loved it, very, very well written.
winterstale 7/20/10 . chapter 1
I've stumbled on a couple of Rose/Jas stories and I have to say I really like the pairing. Recently I saw Eclipse with a few of my fic-writing girls. During the 'training academy' scene, there's a very brief moment between Jackson and Niki that drips with attraction. My beta leaned over to me and snickered "There's a fanfic waiting to happen,". Now I'm on the lookout for good Rose/Jas stories!

I *am* glad the jerk husband was Royce and not Emmett. You did a great job of illustrating Rose's progressive loss of herself in that marriage as well as her loneliness and depression. To me, Jasper is a natural pairing for her in this sort of situation.

Thanks for writing! : )

-w
PrettyFace27 4/14/10 . chapter 1
Love it love it love! I always said I wanted to read a Jasper Rosalie! And it was fucking awesome!

I loved how you pulled it all together it really did turn out great! And you wrote it beautifully!

Royce is such an asshole! If I ever end up in dead end marriage I am soo hiring a gardener!

Knowing my luck is would be some old man... or worse.. an old woman!

I loved the ending! Leaving it open with how things were going to go next with Jasper really works. I adored it!

Anyway...

love you lots babe!

Once again, fantastic job on this!

x
AmberStar63 4/6/10 . chapter 1
Great job Jess... you did a great job and I loved it.
ElleCC 4/4/10 . chapter 1
I love when people switch it up and try different things :)

I liked it! I'm glad you chose Royce instead of Emmett for the bad guy :) I was a little worried about the introduction of Edward, but that went okay, too. Phew. I'm glad that Jasper helped Rose walk away from that life-it doesn't seem like it's something she would have done on her own, and everyone deserves to be happy.

Very nice! Thanks for giving us something different :)
drcullenwantsme 4/3/10 . chapter 1
Very good! I have never read a Jasper-Rose Pairing. I loved it.
Gemgem020507 4/3/10 . chapter 1
*sniffle* Aw! I do love a happy ending! I never thought I would like R/J but I did, I did! I loved it as always! never fail to make me a happy bunny. Jasper was just so cute and loving! *claps* Love it!
mauralee88 4/3/10 . chapter 1
Very nice portrayal of Rose, nice to read a fic where she's not the antagonist.

Never thought I'd enjoy reading a Jasper/Rose lemon...it was a bit weird, but good.

Great ending.
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