i laughed will reading drunk lightning lines i just hat to imagine lightning drunk walking and talking it all XD
Hail!Drunk Lightning!

damn you got the shit beat out of her if I were you if I were her I would a bitch slap the guy

damn she got so drunk that you slurring words

cool, lots of revelations and what not...thou i don't want them to be not sisters...it takes away the incest part of it...still...nice one!
i enjoyed reading the fic in one night...good plot line, well written :D

just a fellow author,
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the reason why you got a lot of reviews is because of the fans of the FF Xii games and the characters themselves...and the yuri/incest that goes along with it (me, being one them loyal fans [that'll defend the game to the death] LOL :)

First of, I liked your story. I liked your writing style, I liked the fluff, the angst, the passion. I found the lemon highly enjoyable.

Yet in no way, not even one bit did I like anything to do with the box, the letter, the fact that they are not sisters.

This sucks. Sorry to put it so harshly. Part of the allure, of the thrill of an incest story is the illicit affair, the forbidden desire, the taboo. By retconning the two of them into just being adopted siblings, you take all that away from your story and you lessen your story with it.

I don't want to flame you, this is suppossed to just be an honest critique. I liked a lot about your story, but I didn't like the twist. It was a letdown, it was the chicken way out.

This chapter was superb. The way you wrote Light when she was drunk made me laugh so hard. Cant wait to read the rest of this amazing fic :)

The whole thing was absolutely stunning. Great job on the tire thing.

You, my friend, deserve all my love and respect. I'm speechless with happiness right now, and really glad that Lightning got her girl. Epic winning. ;D

Wait...Lightning was adopted? And if that's the case,does that mean Serah was adopted as well?

That's new and really interesting, I wonder what happens next! :D

I can't stop reading, great job!

lol Lightning being drunk is the best thing I've read all day. Great Job, I love this chapter! :D

I can't resist reviewing in this specific chapter because I saw myself to Claire. Ohhh boy, got embarrassed what I did. It's funny, I love this story. I hope there would be more and more and more LxS.. :)

That was one of the sweetest Farroncest fics I've ever read. Great plot twist! Definitely set up the edding perfectly. The only thing I have to pick at is that the scenes felt a little disconnected (but that might be lack of sleep making it hard to connect lol). Overall very cute and well done!

I majorly love this story. I've just finished Final Fantasy XIII and XIII-2, and seeing the relationship between the two sisters in this story was amazing! :) In them game, you can tell they're a bit strained as family, especially in XIII-2, even though they still care for each other. This story really focuses on all the 'care', and I was really impressed with it. -

i cannot for the life in me imagine lightning drunk but it was definately a nice touch