I love it! I think it's a good insight into InuYasha's feelings and thoughts. Well done.

Ooh, I LOVE that last line. Just one more HUGE reason for him to stay just the way he is! Why be classified when you can be BETTER? ;-D

"Do I forsake one heritage to embrace the other?

Do truly I become completely...

Incomplete?"

Wow! That was so sad! Your interpretation of what Inuyasha might be feeling goes really deep. I have to say it's hard to find fics like this. Good job!

Pretty good, except for one thing... Inuyasha HAS killed humans before. He did so in the episodes where he became full demon, and most assume that he killed some humans when he stole the Skikon no Tama from Kikyo's village.

Other then that, good job!

erm kinda weird but good...

Very Good.

Wow...that's a really interesting way of looking at things...quite insightful.

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Good job!

that was really good. i liked it a lot. _

wow. that's deep.

It's tough to be a Betwixt and Between; gotta be tougher when the two halves are so contradictory. Great introspection, Ms. Imp.

ooo this is good

wow... that was great! I love the way you totally explored Inu-yasha's feelings! Keep up the good work!

Very nice! I really enjoyed this!