So very sad.

Beautifully done.

Good, really good. And sad, of course. There is not much said, but I can clearly see the picture of the procession. This is the last thing they can do for Lt. Hawkeye, behaving like she would like she would like them to. I love it how your description revolves aroung it.

That was amazing! Wow, it was intense and beautiful. I really enjoyed it; I loved the writing, the feeling, the description, all of it. You're very talented.

I especially loved the ending. Good job.

-Spaazehh

so sad but very very good

Wow. So short, but so powerful. It's heart-breaking, but really good.