Great story. It's an interesting premise, plus being albe to see the Assist Trophies in action is always a plus. A great way to make the Brawl system work... including promotions.

Writing-wise, it's great. Although, there's probably something to be said about the songfic-like part at the end, ha. But it was twisted in pretty well, and for once it wasn't some songfic about a Smasher's undying love for another.

All in all, good job. I'd love to see more of your work!...

hawk