That was beautiful. I was a bit iffy at first when I clicked on the link because I'm not an Edward fan (xD) but I truly did love it. How you display the emotions and bonds between the three of them is absolutely amazing. I wish something like this would have been in the books, but you did a brilliant job filling the void.

That was amazing, keep writing!

I really liked this piece - I thought it was very touching. I kept thinking back to it after my long day. Thanks for writing.

awesome! this story is realy good! it's so in character of edward!

awesome Kat, but you might want to change this if you want to be really perfect: But the worst part of the memory is that it aunts me day and night, you put 'aunts' instead of 'haunts', that's it. It is really good.

A wonderful short story! I enjoy the short ones, as they seem to have a lot more insight into particular characters - as your did of Edward. Thanks for writing it!