Please don't remind me about zim messing up. *shivers in fear* that was really good (:P

Kewl 2! _ OO, I need MORE! common...MORE! pls? continue!

HEEEY THis is GOOD too! YA! I love it how u did it in Zim's POV its sweet! Cus, like, At first it looked like 3rd person, but then it became clear, so its kewl! _

Hey, I like short chapters. Especially late at night, right before i go to bed. ;) Very clever work here, dide. I like how the perspectives changed through the chapters. It makes me wonder who's gonan narrate next... Maybe it'll be GIR... Wait... If GIR narrates, he'll trail off into some idiotic rant about his piggy, won't he? ...It'd STILL be worth reading! :) Keep it up!

MORE MORE MORE! - I can't wait to see what families Dib starts checking out. This should be good _

Wow! Interesting concept. If Zim can't stand to be ignored now, I wonder how he'll feel once Dib is gone? I can't wait to read more.

I like this concept! Hurry with the next chapter!

Wow! I never expected the author to be Zim until he mentioned going to the planetarium! Good take on the fic. I'm gonna go read the next chapter now

Oh the spiffyness! I have to read more of this! MORE I say!