Cute story. Charlotte has always been one of my favorite SD3 characters. You brought out her child like innocence wonderfully. Keep up the great work.

I love it :D It's so super sweet and simple, yet I can totally imagine it happening. I'm glad that it's not any pairing, sometimes they can be too common around here.

But thanks, I think it adds to the adorable-like quality found in the actual game, and the Rabite becoming more of something significant and innocent rather than an annoying monster to hack is cute )

pretty cute