I really liked it

Oh my god what can I say that describes how this made me feel?! I loved it, with my whole heart, it was so adorable and realistic and ohmygodthefeelings! It made me feel sad, that she had to choose between family and love. Interesting, how the evening before she goes, she almost foreshadows her own death. Hauntingly beautiful. Now, I read some of the reviews once I finished the story, to see if any of them had come up with an answer for the last line; most just asked what it meant, so I've had to come up with my own answer.
Honestly, by the way this story was constructed, I think it means she never came out of her parents house -except for one more time in a coffin. It's horrible, but they already disapproved, and I suppose, to an extreme extent (how could someone do that to their CHILD?! D:) it makes sense. R.I.P. Astrid. Toothless will take care of Hiccup, don't worry...oh god Toothless never gets his extra fish *goes to bawl eyes out*

OMG SUCH A MYSTERY! D: :D i don't know what i should think of this but it was really good! :D

Did her parents kill her?! *Whimper*

This is a truely great piece of writing. Only downside is it has left me confused as to what The last line means.

What happened to Astrid

I read the story twice over I I still can't piece it together

Oh my gosh, that was so great! Toothless just seems like a dragon that can comfort you, you know? Have a well deserved cookie!

beautiful! A lovely one-shot!

Very nice, very wellwritten story and a very good take on how Toothless might think.

That last line hit me like a punch to the gut. That's impressive, good work, even if it is very depressing too.

Great job.

woah, what's with the ending! What are you implying! She dies? her parents kidnap her? she totally blows off Hiccup? SHE NEVER COMES BACK? What? Come on, I was feelin happy til that last bit, now I'm depressed. How would Hiccup get over her? He would be depressed too. Sorry about that, this was a really good fic, BESIDES THE ENDING. :)Don't feel bad.

Hmmmm, I like the mysterious ending. Makes me wonder why/ what made Astrid left. I love stories like that! This was fabulously written, I loved seeing things from Toothless's point of view.

Your writing has seriously improved over the years (not that it needed improvement, it just got more awesome). Keep it up. :D

By the line, 'She never comes back', do you mean she never sees Hiccup again, or that she never goes back to her parents?

Good fic, but I'm a bit confused with the ending

uuummmm...yeah i dont get the ending at all...and judging from ur message at the end of the page, im guessing u dont either. howd it all come to THAT ending? im asking not to be rude, but out of curiousity...

This was a good story, I liked how you wrote it through Toothless' POV. But the ending confused me-

Flopsy: WHAT DID YOU MEAN BY "SHE DIDN'T COME BACK?"

Me: so you do care Flopsy, but yeah, did you mean she didn't come back to Hiccup, or she didn't come back to her parents?

D: /gaaasssp!

what happened? my gosh, this is sad, but very well-written. :)

hope you care to create another side to the story because i enjoyed this one.