This story is kinda weird on one end I can understand the logic behind it, but a 6 years old could never ever, whatsoever how mature she might be conceive the idea expressed here... I think if you had let say made her a 16 years old... this story would have made perfect sense, a 16 yo could have conceived the plan to "free" her father from that false life he was living for her, maybe a few years younger at worse, but 6, seem way too young. Still it is a good story, maybe it could have been expanded a bit to show the movement to the idea to "free" her father, making it maybe two to three times longer slowly weaving in her plan. Anyway the concept is good, dramatic, but good, but it could take a long expansion and a few corrections.

Heart-breakingly Beautiful! I love the fact that Richard isn't complete in love with his daughter (i know i know weird) but the fact that he loves his daughter but still has some resentment towards her for killing Kahlan shows how human he is. Even Richard Cypher the seeker, has dark thoughts. I also like that Evers set him free. Ever is alone but at least she reunited her parents.

Great fic happy to know R/K are together again

But sad that their daughter is alone

in the world

But awsome job