|Reviews for Don t do this, Bill|
| hippiechick2112 8/8/10 . chapter 1
other than the grammatical errors, i think you should have expanded on why something like this could have happened. why? the man himself works for nasa and helps people like me understand science better.
i think you should at least put more into the story and beef it up a little. otherwise, it's good.
| Celestial Rainstorm 8/5/10 . chapter 1
Whoa, Bill almost committed the unthinkable! Who knew?