I never thought I'd be saying this but, Jane would make the perfect "Mistress" wouldn't she? LMAO

OMG your beautiful words give me the goosebumps! SO! FANTASTIC! Loved her proclivity towards thinking about the trappers of the species when she was mentally making the list...that revealed so much, and made me wonder who was really doing the trapping as they seemed to volley for position. Quite a scary pair!

"So bourgeois…or proletariat…or whatever catchphrase indicated the masses this week."

I LOL'd at this!

I'm so happy to see you writing and posting. *hugs you and Clem too, for her hand in this*

I miss you, my sweet friend.

Becca

Always figured that creepy Aro for an old pervert LOL!

Sophie was a far too clever and strong willed for the constricting times she lived in.

Loving these EPOVs!

Although Edward isn't, at first, I'm more than happy with Alice's machinations to get Bella back in his life where she belongs LOL!

These two are such a creepy, naughty pair! I've never given so much thought to Jane. You paint her and her ability with a vivid brush. Thanks for sharing your writing!

P.S. I was thinking recently what stories I miss the most and Metaphysics was on it. :)

I love Jane stories. So many layers to her.

:)

The poems were beautiful. Sophie reminds me so much of Bella.

fab/vicki

That was the cutest outtake.

Edward was so sweet with her.

Between Esme and Alice, Edward just doesn't stand a chance.

fab/vicki

I loved his POV, I would love more. His POV definitely showed his struggle with being around Bella from years back and even now in London.

I adore Alice in this. Very matter-of-fact with Edward.

fab/vicki

Oh yeah she knew... loved the outtake.

Loved this take from Edward's POV... how his music was reflected in her heartbeat or vice versa. :)

Ah...another amazing look behind the scenes! She perceived much but at the same time had a long ways to go in figuring things out. Thanks for adding this depth to your story!