Wow, you sound like me in your writing, but better. Overall, I have to say it's awesome. I love your story and hope that you'll write more soon. Nice follow up on the Maximum Ride series. If I matters, (since I am a total stranger) I'm impressed.

This is really good! I have read the first chapters of Angel and I honestly think you version is better. The new perspective was great. Please write more!

Thornessa

I LOVE UR STORY! UR R REALLY AWSOME! U SHOULD EMAIL THIS 2 JP! BUT FIRST I NEED MORE

I loved it! i loved how ur a cat woman! SO FREAKING AWESOME!

omg! that was so good, and i bet ur a HG fan(hunger games)! lol cus foxface was one oof the tributes...that or you just randomly made that name up...lol keep up the good work ) im so glad "kurk" has someone in ur point of view cus im team FAX FOREVER! )

I am a fan of the Maximum Ride series and looking forward to reading the next part of the story.

This is a great chapter for a book of this series, it was a good read and I would read another chapter.

My only negatives are: why in New york, it made me think this was in the past for a second

and could you describe these new characters with more detail

Wow, That's Amazing.

Please Keep Continuing

i LOVE it :)

Learn Your Book Facts! ThaT WAS TOTALLY OFF!

These chapters were really good. Being a published author I really would like to see more. Please write more, I have been checking for almost 3 months. I see potential, not like some of the other "ANGEL: A Maximum Ride Novel" ch. 1 I thinks out there. :)

This is really interesting. I would never have imagined the events in Angel to play out this way. Its really cool to see all the different versions of what people think is going to happen in the next book. I love your version. Update soon please! :)

I really like it. the fact that you gave dylan (kurt&ryan) a background is awesome. up date please

Telling the details, to what happened, and why it happened. At first, I was confused, but now I get it.

I think it's awesome, but, that girl, Nim, is loco. She thinks, that Dylan's Kurt.

ah yes the back story I won't say who and what animals specifically now but what about the other two "interns" *wink wink nudge nudge* oh wait that comes after you recognize someone right...right

Plz plz plz continue w/ the story