You got a good story idea here so far i rather like it. Both of them seems to be captured in a believable way.

awww he brought her breakfast in bed update soon

I'm glad harry is spending the summer with hermione since the fat bastard and his wife are dead

good start

Interesting. I don't generally like after Hogwarts fics, but this was worth reading. I'm a bit of a sucker for Harmony fics. I don't mind the 'not quite right' punctuation and spelling, as you are learning English still, and commend you on your courage for posting.

About the only thing I didn't like was your choice of writing everyone's speech in italics, as italics is usually used for emphasis or to signify someone speaking in a different language.

can't wait to see what Harry has planned.

Could use a Beta Reader and fix some grammer errors too... It's a good story so far

This is a good story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.

interesting! just hope you keep up...

Always interested in a good Harry/Hermione story. I'm interested to see where it goes.

Might I suggest you get a beta reader? There's a lot of grammar mistakes that distract you from the story.