I really love this story and how you manage to untangle such messy emotion Mac & Stella have.

OMG! It's been ages since I started reading this story and finally I had the time to finish it :)

I only can say 3 words about that story: I LOVE IT! :)

I can't say anything else, since those three words already say everything ;-)

You did an amazing job with that story and I sometimes wanted to tell Mac to get the hell out of his misery and tell her already and drop his wrong thoughts about what Stella wanted. I would have loved to kick his ass sometimes :D

Great job, really :)

Thanks for this amazing story.

The beginning is wondeful, but the ending is absolutely great.

Good work.

Hope you write more stuff like this.

Thanks.

i loved IT ALL :) was long read this my afternoon almost gone, but heck it was worth it liked all the angst and fluff

and the ending absolutely fabolous... cant wait until i get on the sequel :D

Seeing that this story is already finished I think I don't need to answer the question if you should continue, but though my answer would be YES!

I loved this start and I'll definitely read this story :) Liked the idea of Mac having a Harley :) and I totally understood Stella's fantasy :D

Great job of ending this with a somewhat open end (meaning it's unknown what exactly happend that night *veg*). A very long chapter once again but this time I only had to stop once or twice since I actually had some time on my hands (no worldcup game today *lol*).

Anyway, I'm once again not sure which part was my favorite in this chapter but I think it's the last scene. Although I can't really say why bc the other ones were good as well. The scene at the waterfall was great bc they finally managed to break through that wall of misunderstandings they had errected around them.

Then the walk in the park was a good scene bc it gave the chapter another pace. After the declaration and with all the little touches and so on, the tension had gotten very high and the walk in the park took that back a bit. I liked that change of pace since it prevented it from ending in a cliché.

Well this is supposed to be a review, so I raked my brain what other constructive comment I could add but I couldn't come up with something except this one. You've got some more "poetic" expressions that you're using quite often and always the same, they're getting kinda repetitive, although that is most visible in the longer chapters and/or if you read them right after another without the usual break during publishing. In the shorter ones I didn't find them as obvious.

And sorry to add that here but after this last chapter I just can't stop myself from saying this... Mac's eyes are not green! I can go with turquise or ocean colored but in all the pictures I've got they're a bluish grey. But please not green XD Stella's got green eyes but not Mac ;) The only green in his eyes is from jealousy *lol*

YAY! I simply love the end of this chapter - besides the fact that it's a very emotional moment for both of them and Mac in pain and... well you know the drill and have him down to perfection anyway ;)

Of course the rest of the chapter wasn't "worse" than the end but this one's just this "squeal" moment *lol*

Anyway. The scene at the fall was heartbreaking, them talking about two totally different things and therefore creating this massive mistunderstanding. I love this kind of twist in a story - especially since they did actually talk afterwards; just not about what they should have addressed. I get the feeling though, that you'll take care of that in the last chapter.

One more chapter to go *g*

Muahaha, liked the chapter again :D

Nice touch once more with revealing more of Mac's history. Kinda sad and scar story for little Mac to get lost in the woods but I like the spiritual component since it's not something you would usually see with Mac. It's a new side to him but I think it fits well.

I feel sorry for him about his fear for Stella and the guilt he seems to feel for being scared about her life. I think it puts a lot of Stress on him. But I'm not sure if that's really him or not also partly a fever he's sporting.

Now I'm curious where they're going and what else Mac has in store for her.

Have fun with your vacation!

I finally managed to read through the whole chapter XD I think I started like four times bc I never had time time to finish it in one go and then had to start all over again, so I wouldn't miss anything.

Now I don't even know which scene was my favorite, there were so many. Thanks for explaining why Mac was there with his Dad when it was so far away from Chicago. It's a little detail but it's also something that makes the story more believable because it makes it more logical.

I can understand why Stella didn't wanted to look away from Mac when he was changing ;) There's nobody who could fail her for that *lol* - at least not amongst the female readers, hehe.

The fire scene was totally cute and again I liked that you revealed something from Mac's past. I think what I liked most is that he isn't that insecure about himself but instead thinks he's worth Stella, even if she might not turn out to be interested in a relationship. I think them being afraid of losing a friendship is much more likely than either one thinking the other wouldn't deem them worthy of a partner. They wouldn't be such good friends if they would think like that all the time.

Mac's pain and wincing makes me a bit worried but also excited because there's more to come.

Only thing I still have a problem with is the length of the chapter ;) 8000 words is a lot to read but twice that is usually too much for me to read it inbetween work assignments. I hope I'll get to finish the other chapters sooner *g* Giving my best!

Beautiful. They are finally together after so much heartache. It was simply beautiful. I love the image of them stood next to a waterfall kissing. *sighs* They are just meant to be together. Well done for the fantastic writing! :D

Aw this was such a beautiful story! I'm sad to see it end :( In regards to you making a sequel; is that a rhetorical question? :P of COURSE we want a sequel ;) Um, angst, drama, and fluffy hot smacked? what's not to love ;)

I vote sequel. Hands down ;)

Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed reading it :)

awesome! I love it... I'm dying to read your story... please please please... sequel please... I love you! I love your story (heheh, sound weird huh but I love you, your story... truly awesome) love you muahhhhh

This was such an amazing and beautifully written story! Please write a sequel! I loved how you slowly brought our Smacked together (though painful at times) and the end was so sweet! Looking forward to more!

It has been really wonderful. I will miss to read more every weekend.

Paz

not just the ending itself, but the whole story is just so so so lovely, wildweasel! :)