I was just flabbergasted! By the way, loved the way you described everything. Good grammar. Good spelling. And you had me thinking Lina was upset about Gourry marrying Sylfiel the whole time!

muffeld chuckell...shackes head... opends mouth to peak... desides against it and more muffled chuckling can be heird... Right... this was.. this... was... er.. Right...

Man, talk about a twist ending!

This is something to say to 'very angry' *glares at reveiwer below her* IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT, DON'T REVEIW IT! IF YOU ARE SO PASSIONATE ABOUT 'PROTECTING ANIME CHARACTERS', THAN YOU OBVIOUSLY HAVE A PROBLEM. IT IS ONE THING TO ARUE ABOUT COUPLES (go Z/A and L/G)BUT IT IS ANOTHER THING TO GET PISSY ABOUT HUMOR! IT IS A JOKE YOU IDIOT! Okay, now that I'm done having fun with my caps lock key...hehe, that was funny! _ Kinky, but funny!

this is the worst fan fic I have ever read, this is stupid, childish and disgusting. How dare you insult Lina Inverse with this stupid story of yours. This story should be burn at the stakes. You are not a writer, just some pathetic wanna be who takes pleasure at making fun of anime characters. You deserve to be dragon slave you cross dressing bimbo.

*Falls flat on her back with shock*...

O.o Seriously was NOT expecting THAT!

HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!

O.O Ahhhhh! Lina is a guy! *runs for the hills*

good good good! that was really funny. you know if lina (not that she's real) could hear you say that she would cast a fireball or dragonslave on you. dude, its really good. it reminded me of the episode of slayers NEXT where all the women in the kingdom of Femille turn our to be guys. How do you submit and write a story on fanfiction? I'm confused.