Very Clever. I love the way you write Gibbs and Abby. Their dialogue always feels genuine.

well look at that! i have read a LOT of fanfic... and i don't remember a fic like this. really such a simple concept, but you NAILED it! very very cute!

heheh lourve it! -audacious

(smirk)

Oh, that was good. Really good. Well done with the fic inside the fic inside the fic. And the smut, excellent.

Aw, Amy, I totally love it! Awesome one, great sequel!

Perfection! Love it!

LOLOL! This was great! :D

This was awesome! Hope you'll write more soon!

Sorry about what? No need! Never apoligize about shipping Gabby. Thank you for the this one, I enjoyed it.

that was fabulous. gibbs is hot. abby's got the right idea for sure. apparently, many others do as well - why else would people sit down on a tuesday night and watch ncis - and every other day of the week on usa? one word - GIBBS! lol

Never apologize, it's a sign of...oh never mind, just bring on the smut! _

YOU ENDED IT YOU WEENIE!

I was secretly hoping you would follow up on What's Wrong With These People? This was a delightful surprise. I enjoyed it immensely. If I haven't said this before, I'll say it now, you are one of the most talented fic authors I've read (in any fandom) and I am so glad that you ship Gabby.

Just out of curiosity, was that fic Abby was talking about real or just something you made up for this fic. If it isn't a real fic, would you mind writing it? :p

I LOVE this series...