 gratuity 4/25/02 . chapter 1kawaii! Z/A RULES! Although I wasn't sure why the hell Zel said Xel was his 'older brother'. GO figure. AM i mising something? WEll besides that I loved your ficcie! |
 Zaphi Nashii 2/7/02 . chapter 1heheh...that was cool.
I read another fanfiction(one of the greatest I ever read) that had them as brothers
I like them as brothers.
once again
COOL
a little harsh on lina though
but hey! Its your fanfic, think what you wanna think and do what you wanna do.
once again
cool |
 Dee Jay 2/6/02 . chapter 1 Poor Xellos. Are they really half-brothers? Freaky... |
 Lauren-sama 2/5/02 . chapter 1This is looking to be very interesting! Far from what I was expecting... (and that's a good thing, by the way)
Can't wait to read more. |
 Rivenchu 2/5/02 . chapter 1n.n I liked it. |
 dawninglight2000 2/5/02 . chapter 1 *scratches head* ANOTHER Zel/Amelia fic? It's well written, and now I wanna read the next chapter... but... *Stops bother to trying to explain her annoyance* Just get the next chapter out! |