Liked this.

This is just lovely. Your A/N made me wonder: you do know Charlie Chaplin composed and wrote the lyrics of "Smile", right? For some reason that makes this story even sweeter to me.

Another great story. Sophie's part at the beginning was very chilling (It gave me the creeps, but it was suppose to, so that was the first time I can think of that being a good thing.)

Love your stuff.

that was great loved it

Really good story. Very well written.

This was great! How great? Well... I'd put some cheese - sticks in the oven, and then read this. I knew the food was ready but I was so close to finishing the story. So I stayed and read the story and the cheese exploded out of the stick. lol. but it was worth it. )

Beautiful, what with the scenes fitting marvelously to the song lyrics you gave for each and every team member. And how well all those little scenes added up to telling the story, great!

"An agitated smile for jobs that were on their way south but he was still trying to rally the troops into believing they could pull it off." LOL, that would be my favourite line in here.

It's not only a fitting description for Nate's smile sometimes (so, who am I kidding; most of the time when on a job, hehe) but also for the situations they all find themselves in more often than not.

Too sweet, how Eliot had everyone he cared about gathered at his bedside in the hospital when he woke up, finally. I agree, it goes a long way of helping him by knowing at once that everyone was safe and he was being taken care of himself as well.

This story made me cry a little, and is absolutely beautifully written. I especially like how you didn't let the reader know that he's in a coma til late in the game. So very excellent, well done

I love this story, the characterizations were pretty tight and i loved the ending, the sun coming out after the rain. It was a litle unclear in the beginnning what was happening but i caught on and i enjoyed the way you gave everybodys -

That was beautiful, thank you. :)

I really like the way your characters are spot on. This story had just enough detail (but not too much) so that it was lovely to read and not bogged down. What you imagine from a story like this fills in all the blanks.

Really lovely. :)

Great fic!

Aw pj, this was great! I loved the whole image of the team not being able to give in to their feelings because they had to continue the con, and have to keep straight faces throughout. Would LOVE to see another chap. from Eliot's POV (hint hint?). Also really liked the 'Smile' song throughout the fic. Great job!

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Creative use of a beautiful song. And all nicely in character. I really enjoy your work.

...That and if you write fics, you might just be able to keep the Leverage withdrawal at bay! Another really nice fic from you! I think their reactions are so...them! Love it!

Very sweet!