I love how you characterized Staton and Collin. But you missed spelled Tianna and The Atrox.I wish they had this plan in the book because it was really good. For your next one an idea... um... you could write about their wedding. Just an idea.

Ha ha, Stanton. Straight to the point. Continue!

Was the 'lowly immoral' part intentional, or did you mean immortal? I couldn't tell..but it was so funny!